The Official Writing Challenge
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02/04/07
There are a lot of good ideas here. Separating the ideas into paragraphs of similar thoughts would help make this piece better, but as it is you expressed yourself well and very clearly. Keep writing!
02/05/07
Good devotional! You do need to break it up in paragraphs as Donna suggested and then maybe add an example that is more personal. Doing that may create more interest to the reader:)