The Official Writing Challenge
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01/26/07
In reading this piece it has a real "from the heart" feel to it. I especially like the line "but the shades of self ambition are colorless in hue". Nice job!
01/26/07
A beautiful piece. Your rhythm was off in places, but the story touched my heart. I recognize talent here. :-)
01/26/07
Very nice, and I felt your sincerity. This tale of rededication brought a new focus to the topic and it was a nice job.