The Official Writing Challenge
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01/27/07
Cute story!
01/28/07
Cute story with a great message about using our own talents and not trying to do what God created someone else to do.
01/29/07
Very cute story! I loved the dialogue.
01/29/07
Authentic dialog and an enjoyable story. Nicely written.
01/30/07
This is sweet, and I like the good-natured relationships between family members here. This is also very well-written.

The only thing it may lack is conflict, one of the essential elements of a short story. But this is a very minor quibble, as you've written quite a charming entry.
Very interesting and funny article. Thanks for sharing.
This was sweet! And I love the part with the 'hidden talents'. The dialouge was pretty good and I liked the interaction between the kids and mom. Great job!
Good story and nicely written.
03/13/07
I think it is a good article. Great conversation between Kids and Mom. I also love the way the story develops. Full of suspence. Keep it up.
This is really cute! Very deep in a light sort of way. No wonder it was highly commended!