The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/07
You've got some great analogies here. I'd love to see you expand on some of them to flesh this out, maybe give some real-life examples to make this more personal. Much to think of in this piece. Keep writing!
01/25/07
Very interesting article, I could have read some more.........
I can just sum up your writing by one word... awesome! I loved your analogy.
01/26/07
01/26/07
I do agree with the above comment of your analogy comparing an actual automobile to describing your "artomobile" for the Master.
01/28/07
The title was creative, and your piece was as well. Keep up the journey!
01/28/07
A very cute title and a nice story to go along with it. Nice job.