The Official Writing Challenge
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01/18/07
Loved the title, loved the meter, loved the message. You lost me a bit on the last line: the "burning it" is great, but the lost meter kind of sent me into a screeching halt.

The rest of the poem was one of the strongest I've read at this level--really, really good.
01/18/07
Amazing work, loved it!
01/19/07
I was attacted by your clever title and then drawn in by your good poetry and your excellent message! :)