The Official Writing Challenge
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01/19/07
How lovely to see a child through the eyes of God, and to see that child's beauty despite any disability or outward appearance. This poem has some lovely moments. Nice work.
01/20/07
This was just absolutely wonderful--so very moving and heartwarming. I loved it.
Beautiful. Brings a tear to your eye as you read, a very tender story, well-shared. There were a few awkward lines near the top, like using 'the' and 'can' maybe tigten it up a bit? Otherwise, this was very well done!
01/25/07
Beautiful poem! It moved me to tears! This poem was very well written. It indeed paint a wonderfully beautiful picture.