The Official Writing Challenge
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How lovely to see a child through the eyes of God, and to see that child's beauty despite any disability or outward appearance. This poem has some lovely moments. Nice work.
This was just absolutely wonderful--so very moving and heartwarming. I loved it.
Beautiful. Brings a tear to your eye as you read, a very tender story, well-shared. There were a few awkward lines near the top, like using 'the' and 'can' maybe tigten it up a bit? Otherwise, this was very well done!
Beautiful poem! It moved me to tears! This poem was very well written. It indeed paint a wonderfully beautiful picture.