The Official Writing Challenge
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Very heartwarming and a lovely reminder of how the things that we do for our children are seen and evaluated by them. I loved the ending. Good work!
I really like this story. :0)Thank you for this gentle reminder of how important each of us are and the daily things that we do, no matter how insignificant they may seem to us at the time. Good flow. Keep up the writing. I enjoyed this.
This is definitely a favorite of mine this week! I absolutely loved it from beginning to end, a few chuckles thrown in here and there and I liked the part with the cheese sauce! The ending was the best though, keep up the great writing!
Awesome - you won't be in beginners for much longer. Great job!
Very nice - and what a wonderful reminder!
Great story and great message. Keep up the good work.
I enjoyed this. well written, I could picture my kids and their friends behaving the same way. keep up the good work!
This was really a great read. I liked every word of it. Good job.
I love the message you mixed into this wonderful entry! Thanks for sharing!!
I'll add my high commendations to this excellent article on cooking for love.
Great message, girl - AWESOME for a first challenge my friend :)
Thank you. I too hate to cook but love to bake! This was a great essay. You should be proud!