The Official Writing Challenge
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01/11/07
Good job - I enjoyed your story.
01/11/07
The story is great. Needs some rework and I got lost in a few places. This piece has some awesome potential. Good job.
01/12/07
I loved this story! Its vivid descriptions and realistic dialogue put me right there in the kitchen with those two delightful sisters. I could see the "little girl" versions of her mommy's food and hear the two sisters bickering. Very touching ending. I also love the descriptive verbs used such as "slumped" and "slouched." Great job!
01/13/07
What a lovely plan! This girl has a heart of gold and I found myself praying that God would comfort her. Nicely done.
Oh! I really loved this. It is so heartwarming.