The Official Writing Challenge
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12/07/06
What a wonderful opening line!! The whole piece, from start to finish, was inspiring and very well-written! I loved it! It's truly a winner in my opinion! :D
12/07/06
I loved the message of this story! The two contrasting main characters were also brought to life in it beautifully.

Would like to see the story open with the description of the shabbily-dressed man entering the church--then read about the pastor's original mindset in the second paragraph.

Great dialogue and narrative!
Reminds me of Mark 10:21 - truly a difficult challenge, and one that proves out that where a man's heart is, is where you will also find his treasure.
Good job expressing this!
12/09/06
Very well written. He pastored the pastor! I think that this is very well done.