The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved this story--both the unusual title and the opening line drew me in. Great dialogue! The characters really came alive.
Your title drew me in, and your story kept me here! Great dialogue - it definitely felt completely authentic. Nice job!
I also loved the title and the characters seemed real to me, too. This pastor seemed like a real person to me. What a shame to have to fight over such "little" things but I know these are real issues in some places. Very good job writing an enjoyable story.
I can't believe there weren't more comments on this. Fun story! I love the title.