The Official Writing Challenge
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12/02/06
I enjoyed your message and the dialogue between the two characters. It would have made for easier reading, though, if you'd spaced whenever a different person spoke.

Also, who was Jim? He was mentioned briefly, but what did he have to do with the story?

Anyway, I hope Tyler decided to help out with the Community Kindness day! :)