The Official Writing Challenge
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Very intriguing! I was caught up in the mystery of this piece throughout. This had a real ethereal quality. Fine job!
Love it! My absolute favorite.
Very good! I especially like the part about the eyes, as I believe the eyes are the most telling feature of any human being!
An excellent story and it captured my attention from beginning to end. A very good job!
Janice...I loved this!!! You are my inspiration! I know I need to work on my imagery so I am going to read everything you have wriiten! I also took your advice on "The Man in the Park." I changed some things. Thanks! Suellen Fry-Washington
This is a very compelling story. Very strong characters here. You did a good job.