The Official Writing Challenge
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11/18/06
Very nice, very true. You said exactly what needed to be said, and the poem is very nice too. Good work.
11/18/06
Very nice, very true. You said exactly what needed to be said, and the poem is very nice too. Good work.
11/18/06
Such a charming piece - I enjoyed your imagery very much, and such a wonderful message. What a lifeguard we have indeed!
11/19/06
Probably the best poem on this topic in the Beginner's level. Nice job!