The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/05
One garden where sin's seed brought death to mankind; another garden where the seed of righteousness brought life to those deceived.

I really liked this piece. Thanks for sharing. God bless you.
01/25/05
very descriptive, excellent conclusion
THis was so wonderful and full of descriptive words that drew me in. You so beautifully wove the words together making the experience almost a personal one. Very good and do continue writing.
Very nice. Keep it up!
I liked this. Good job with good word imagery. God bless you.
01/29/05
Beautiful and very well written.

I like the two gardens. I am working on a story which reflects the same thoughts.

Kathy
01/29/05
Great use of contrast/comparison in this piece. The juxtaposition of the two garden - one bringing death and the other destroying it was quite effective. Well done.
Beautiful entry. Wonderful description.
01/31/05
Thank you for this article. It was awesome!I loved the ending and the reminder of what Jesus did for me.
01/31/05
Congratulations DeAnna on your second week in 2nd Place for the Level 1 Challenge. You really need to move up to either Intermediate or Advanced now, if you haven't already done so. Love, Deb (Challenge Co-ordinator)