The Official Writing Challenge
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You certainly provided me with a few chuckles with this article! I was drained after I read it! :o) Congratulations on the clever title with two meanings.

This is a very good personal experience story. It just needs a little polishing with punctuation to separate out some of the long sentences, but it's a fine entry. Kudos to you and keep writing!

11/12/06
This was interesting, and I could empathize with the busy mom in this story. Keep writing!
What a very true description of how some of our days go sometimes! I could feel the frustration and exasperation of rushing around and nothing going just right. Great job! (and cute title!)