The Official Writing Challenge
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A few editing errors that could be fixed easy enough. Good story and a great testimony of the power of one person investing and caring for others in a simple way. What a blessing this lady was.
10/27/06
Great example...I agree that the a little cleaning would improve the clarity but good story nonetheless. Thank you.
10/30/06
This was a compelling story and I felt your love and enthusiasm for these ladies. keep writing; you have a gift for storytelling.
10/30/06
Very nice. I really liked the description on the little old ladies' stories; made me want to hear those stories, too!