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10/13/06
This is a really clever concept, and skillfully written. I liked it a lot. My question: where are the "new recruits" coming from? Are there really "new" demons? That's nothing major, though...this was lots of fun to read.
10/13/06
I really like the way you used words to desribe in this story. I enjoyed this very much. Keep it up.
I loved it. What a marvelous picture! Thank you.
10/14/06
Wow! What an interesting concept! I am glad that we have the Blood of Jesus to quench the onslaught of Satan and all his demons.
I really didn't see that coming. Wow, what a good analogy you have here.
10/16/06
interesting thoughts here. Though, I do agree with the remark about if there is a such thing as 'new demons'