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Excellent comparison in spiritual fire-fighters and regular ones. Good job.
10/12/06
Excellent analogy, well presented.
10/13/06
Very nicely done! Your comparison was clear and well documented. Good work.
10/17/06
Very nice job describing the firefighter's sacrifice. Good use of scripture with "Greater love has no man." I'm bit confused by the phrase " for the same" in the 6th paragraph? Could just be me.:) I loved this line: "It is a power sent for the backup gladiators, warring on their knees in the home trench."
Very good article. Wonderful pov. Good job.