The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful story. Very touching.
09/18/06
Such a lovely story. I enjoyed this - great characterization for all people in this. Keep writing!
09/18/06
What a lovely and touching story! God truly sent you into Greta's life, and provided you to give her some glimpses of joy. Thank you for sharing this!
aww. This is a great story. I love the ones that tear at your heart. Very well written. Great job!
09/21/06
Interesting story. The title made me curious. Left me thinking about the various people involved. It would improve the flow of the story to make sure that your tense is consistent ie. past and present not mixed together. It was a good finish to the story, although rather sad.