The Official Writing Challenge
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09/17/06
Nice comparison between your father and our Heavenly Father. Thanks for sharing this
09/18/06
The story is really appropriate for the devotional. You told it in a very visual way - I could see the characters so clearly. Hint: break up the big chunk of writing into a new paragraph as each new thought/idea is presented. Makes it easier for the reader to follow.