The Official Writing Challenge
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09/08/06
a very profound comment but so true. I love your description and the way that you carried the comparison to its conclusion!
I loved this line:

"New life will spring in crevices forgotten, even those I wish to forget."

Keep writing!
09/12/06
This is really nice and I enjoyed it.

Keep writing!
Wonderful analogy and a an even more wonderful message. Great entry! Keep it coming!
09/13/06
Wonderful, wonderful message! You did an awesome job of illustrating this analogy. Wonderful!! Great title, too!