The Official Writing Challenge
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09/08/06
I like the way that you tie the poem together. Very interesting progression.
09/10/06
The structure of this poem is absolutely beautiful!

Watch your spelling: follow and their were two that jumped out at me.

I keep going back to the structure itself, though--each line flowing into the next. Very watery and appropriate.
09/10/06
I love the structure of this as well! Full circle - very clever! Great job!
09/10/06
Interesting. I've never seen this style before. Neat to see how one 'flows' into the next.
09/10/06
Wow! I agree with other comments. I really enjoyed the flow of this piece--it's very creative and river-like in its construction.
09/11/06
A very good view of the circle of life.. well done.