The Official Writing Challenge
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08/31/06
What a wonderful illustration. Excellent work.
09/01/06
very nice way to compare a musical group to a family. Very true!
I liked this. I too, make a joyful noise.

Keep writing.
09/05/06
The "mafia" line cracked me up! You did a bit of tense-switching here, but nothing major--it's a sweet and meaningful essay. Thanks!