The Official Writing Challenge
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08/25/06
This is a great reminder of how busy our lives can get, how we forget, at times that Christ made such a great sacrifice for us. Great writing!!! I enjoyed it :O)

God Bless,
Kaye
08/29/06
The repeated sentence--it causes one's heart to move to one's throat--so moving!
08/29/06
As Jan said, very moving! Cast our cares, how often I forget! Thanks for the reminder!
08/29/06
VERY effective use of repetition of the line! It certainly put it all in perspective, didn't it? Great writing!