The Official Writing Challenge
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08/27/06
Nice analogy between Abraham/Issac and God/Jesus. It might have been nice though to have the Abraham story part written out a bit more short-story-ish to grab your readers' attention. Great thoughts, just too short...we want to read more!
08/27/06
You cover a lot in this work. It appears to be a poem - you might want to format it like one (put each stanza into lines, instead of grouping them all together). Otherwise, wonderful message!