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What I like - loved the way you wrote this - the detail and the way you did the dialogue. Wonderful. Great devotional.

What I might change - nothing stuck out!:) at first I thought the expression 'three sheets to the wind ' was too overused and but then the next sentence made me think it worked well with your voice.
Very creative and told a great story and good point!
Oh yes, you can really communicate beautifully.
Love your prose style and its such an honest tale it applys to all of us on the whole. I recommend it as a great read for all.
Great story and thanks for the reminder that it's really all about GRACE! I grew up in a judgemental church system and sometimes I still struggle to respond with grace instead of criticism. Thanks for sharing!
Very nice. It left me wondering why the/your husband spent time in jail, but that really isn't crucial to your point!
Extremely well written. You made many a good point in this essay - and it sank in, giving me a new insight into the symbol of the Cross. Thanks for sharing. Very nicely done.