The Official Writing Challenge
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A very nice exposition of the 23rd Psalm. I'd encourage you to avoid using dictionary definitions; rather, "define" the word by inference, and by using your own unique style.
"I am not to camp out in the valley, but go through it..." Yes, yes, yes! This sweet little piece is encouraging and uplifting indeed! Good work!
Expand the question of "Is a valley a good thing or a bad thing (Biblically or otherwise)?" Maybe you could include some real-life examples of times of challenge, triumph, or rest. (which wouldn't have to be soul-searchingly painful things)

Good thoughts here. Keep writing.
A beautiful description of a valley, and a nice devotional; just a few minor glitch's that need editing, but otherwise a very good job.