The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/05
Good story. I think I would have said that someone shrewdly watched her stealing and reported it, or Carla shrewdly searched for fresh ideas to help it fit in more with the challenge topic.
Sally's idea to include the topic words is an excellent way to give more insight into to this great read. What I liked here was that Carla didn't rationalize, you let her just confess and you showed how an employer who had faith herself, let God lead. Little special lessons were woven into this story. I liked it very much.
03/17/05
ever employer needs people with Carla's dedication