The Official Writing Challenge
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Encouraging sentiments, a very sweet poem.

When punctuating a poem, you do not need commas at the end of every line. They acutally tend to impede the rhythm a bit. Punctuate just as you would a sentence, and you'll be fine.

I like this one.
I agree with Jan about the punctuation. Good job on the poem.