The Official Writing Challenge
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08/18/06
I really like your title--I was expecting something about an armed robbery, perhaps, and instead got this lovely little devotional about surrender and praise.
08/22/06
It's hard to write good devotionals, but you did it, well done.
This is a good article, but it would be much better if you watched your tenses and sentence structure.