The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow, what a tense scene! Good job.
I have ridden a horse like that, and been in a couple of brush fires - you described things perfectly.

Some good imagery here.
Very good imagry. I can tell you've been in the saddle more than once. Just a couple places where I noticed a tense problem, but nothing that took away from the picture you so adeptly painted. Keep writing.
As I might have mentioned elsewhere, your prose is like poetry in the beautiful way you string your words together. This reads like part of a novel, and the intensity comes through as I suspect it would if I were seeing it on screen in living color. Now, I shall have to keep reading your stuff to see if I find an entry the judges noticed :)

Keep writing, Friend! I really appreciate you.
I'm amazed at all these good beginners' writings. This was well told.