The Official Writing Challenge
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08/13/06
LOL!!
THis is hilarious - I think it really captures the humour and punch of Jesus' words. Really well done - one of my favourites this week.
My favourite line: '“Calm down, please. I only want to help you. I know we can take it out and if you don’t like it we’ll put it back. No harm in trying,” Maddy persuaded.'
08/18/06
Fantastic writing!!