The Official Writing Challenge
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Normally I don't like fictional stories based on the Bible but this was an exception! I think you really captured the relief and joy of Liron when they realised their offering had been accepted. You really conveyed the seriousness of their task in this stroy. Well done - another person who won't be in Beginner's for long!
Fascinating perspective on the theme, great imagination, super message and well-written to boot! Good job.
You had my attention throughout. Well written and a perfect ending. Thank you for sharing.
Wow - very cool :) As someone who's done needlework, I really enjoyed this :)
I Loved your story!!!! I so enjoyed the way you protrayed Liron's character. Your entry has a nice surface story, but the undercurrents are deep and meaningful. Excellent job in ministering what God placed on your heart. I cannot predict winners, but your story will be one of my favorites for a long time.
God Bless. I'll be loking forward to reading your stories in higher levels soon.
Oh yes, I wanted to say, your stories details are as elegant as the stiches sewed in the fabric for God's desert Tabernacle. Well done.
Congrats Dan! I knew this story would do well. God Bless.
Excellent story. I've been studying the tabernacle lately so this story was especially meaningful. Thanks so much for sharing your imagination.
Thank you for bringing such a personal perspective to part of the Bible that seemed as dry as bread crumbs! I always associate needlework with women; it is good to be reminded that God uses all hands on deck.