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| TITLE: Vortex | Writing Challenge By Beth LaBuff 08/20/15 | ~ 7th Place  LEAVE COMMENT ON ARTICLE SEND A PRIVATE COMMENT ADD TO MY FAVORITES |
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| Member | Date | |
Ellen Carr  | 08/23/15 | |
| Great writing! A mystery - most enjoyable. | ||
| Noel Mitaxa | 08/27/15 | |
| Wow! This one really loads the suspense and curiosity, but at the end you gave me the chance to ketchup with you. Great descriptive work. | ||
| Danielle King | 08/27/15 | |
| WOW! This is so clever! I was beginning to get shivers down my spine at one point. That mysterious grey eyed lady was freaking me out, but your ending was absolutely brilliant. Congratulations on your EC win. Well worthy. | ||
| Yvonne Blake | 08/28/15 | |
| Oh wow! Very mysterious! I want to know what it all means. Who was that lady? Congratulations, Bethy. (and it wasn't even a poem) | ||
| Francy Judge | 08/28/15 | |
| What a creative idea for the topic! I love the combination of mystery and humor. Great writing! | ||
| Verna Cole Mitchell | 08/28/15 | |
| Congratulations for you EC for a wonderfully mysterious story! I enjoyed it. | ||
| Ellen Carr | 08/28/15 | |
| Congratulations, Beth. A well deserved EC for this. | ||
| Bea Edwards | 08/29/15 | |
| Mystery adventures are my favorite genre so thanks for your enticing piece! Superb ending to cleverly written tale. | ||
| C D Swanson | 09/03/15 | |
| Congrats! God bless~ | ||
