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| TITLE: The Brigadier and the Merchant's Daughter | Writing Challenge By Beth LaBuff 06/14/11 | ~ 8th Place  LEAVE COMMENT ON ARTICLE SEND A PRIVATE COMMENT ADD TO MY FAVORITES |
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| Member | Date | |
Laury Hubrich  | 06/16/11 | |
| Wow! There is so much emotion here. It would take a long time to analyze this poem. It leaves me with an eerie feeling and I can't shake it. Excellent work. | ||
| Verna Cole Mitchell | 06/16/11 | |
| Ahhhhh you made a new favorite poem from one of my old favorite poems. I love the story and your wonderful word choices. | ||
| Virgil Youngblood | 06/16/11 | |
| Outstanding. A winner for sure. | ||
| Noel Mitaxa | 06/16/11 | |
| No apology needed from Noyes or from anyone else. Brilliant in concept and colour, and in the creativity of your construction. (How about that for alliteration???) It deserves to score well. | ||
| Charla Diehl | 06/17/11 | |
| The stories you weave with your poetic talents never cease to amaze, amuse and entertain me. I expect to see this in the EC list for sure. Great mind pictures throughout this piece that drew me in and kept me there until the closing verse. Excellent!!!!! | ||
| Bonnie Bowden | 06/19/11 | |
| This poem's story was captivating from beginning to end. I haven't read the Highwayman before, but believe me, you don't have to apologize for. If this doesn't make the EC list, I will be very surprised. | ||
| Rachel Phelps | 06/21/11 | |
| I LOVE the Highwayman, so this was a wonderful treat. I recognized it from the first line. Amazing work, as always. | ||
| Eliza Evans | 06/21/11 | |
| You make FaithWriters a better place, Beth. :) Your poems just lift me up! Wonderful in every way. Keep writing and sharing. | ||
| Edmond Ng | 06/22/11 | |
| An intriguing read masterfully written. This poem leaves me wanting ... to unravel the puzzlement of Rose's checkout and 'resurrection'—a dream or mistaken identity? An excellent and exceptional piece! | ||
| Lillian Rhoades | 06/23/11 | |
| This is too much!:-) You've raised the bar. Totally awesome, and up there with Poe,Noyes and the rest of them:-) Gotta be a winner!! | ||
| Verna Cole Mitchell | 06/23/11 | |
| Woo Hoo--I'm happy dancin' with you. I KNEW this one had to be a winner. Proud of you, Twin! | ||
| Carol Penhorwood | 06/23/11 | |
| A bow to the master! Your creativity and gift truly amazes me. | ||
| Patricia Turner | 06/23/11 | |
| I recognized the meter of the Highway Man right off and I think you have no need for the apology. I always look forward to your poems, Beth. Always a treat! Congratulations! | ||
| Sharlyn Guthrie | 06/23/11 | |
| Hauntingly beautiful, Beth! I love it. Congratulations on your EC! | ||
| Bonnie Bowden | 07/04/11 | |
| Congratulations Beth on your awesome EC win! | ||
| Jan Ackerson | 08/24/11 | |
| Beth, I'm going to feature this on the Front Page Showcase for the week of September 19. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page--and congratulations! | ||
| Virgil Youngblood | 09/28/11 | |
| Congratulations on being "Showcased." This recognition is highly deserved. | ||
