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TITLE: A love song to God
By C.E. Johnson
09/28/08
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I was listening to Aria de Mezzo Carattere - Final Fantasy 3 Opera Scene and a different set of lyrics came to mine.

In the fourth stanza, first line, I wanted to say, "Through times of despair"
but I was afraid that it was too close to the orignal "Through arms of despair" so I changed it to Though times are unfair.
You’re my hero
My soul’s salvation
You turn my gray skies
to sun rays.

There’ll not be a day
Where I’ll turn away
From you
My true beloved

I’m the twilight
You’re the sunlight
Bringing life to me.

Though times are unfair
You’re always there
Loving me with care.
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