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TITLE: The Unwritten Letter- revised
By Lauren Dahl
04/01/08
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In addition to other critiques, I would really appreciate it if you would read my original as well and tell me which is better. Thanks!
I want to write a letter
To say I still think of you,
I should have known better,
You see, my hands are tied.

I sit and pick up the pen
But the words just won’t come.
I’ll give you a call then,
Anyway, it’s better to talk.

But what am I to say?
There is an awkward silence.
All my words have fled away
And now the call is over.

I long to tell you how I feel,
But it’s all trapped inside.
I long to break the iron seal,
Do you know I love you?
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