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TITLE: Since You Have Left Me Alone
By Donna Wasson
08/08/07
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Just trying my hand at lyrics. Tell me what you think!
I know why
I can’t see any stars up in the sky
All I see are storm clouds passing by
Me now
Since you have left me alone

Guess it’s true
You say you’ve gone and found somebody new
You’ve done this all before, it’s déjà vu
For me
Since you have left me alone

But maybe you should know all is not what it seems
You think that she’s so perfect and so sweet
But I’ve known your lover for many years now
While she runs around on you she’ll be discreet

And I’ll smile
Watching how you suffer in denial
'Cause'she won’t take an inch, she’ll take a mile
From you
So glad you left me alone
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