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TITLE: Can You Hear me? 12/24/2015
By Wesley Hesketh
12/24/15
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I stand before you a retched soul my imperfection blind my way but if I do not know them there would be no growth Please read what I say I know that I will stumble the words are hard to find so thank you for reading this and now tell me what's on your mind
Can You Hear me?

I sit here and I tremble
for all that I have done.
You are my Lord and Master
to me You are the One.

Every time I ask You
I feel Your loving hand.
When I feel so alone
You always understand.

I cry out in this darkness
let me see Your Light.
Touch me and please heal me
let me feel Your might.

You do so much for me
the desires of my heart.
There’s no one I love more
in my life please be a part.

I’m afraid I am a burden
I can’t seem to get it right.
Hold me in Your wings
let me feel Your might.

Whatever You have for me
please show me the way.
Hold my hand and lead me
teach me what to say.

I lay down before You
I offer up my soul.
I’m handing You half a man
please God just make me whole.

I’ll trust You forever
You’ve given me Your Son.
Take me from this darkness
forgive the things I’ve done.

You’ve given me so much
You answer my every prayer.
I know I feel Your warmth
I’m glad that You are there.
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