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Stuck In Traffic on Joy Boulevard
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I was driving down life’s freeway,
Unhappy, no pleasure in sight.
When all at once, I saw a sign:
“Joy Boulevard, NEXT RIGHT.”
Then felt immediately compelled--
“I must turn right, I can’t resist,”
So I swerved to hit Joy’s trail.
At first, I was speeding ‘long nicely,
Sheer elation running through my brain;
Reality interrupted with a rude, loud
And I jerked to the caution lane.
Before I knew it, a car appeared,
He said his name was
“I’ll change your tire, give you every desire;
Just hand me over your keys.”
Behind me, I suddenly heard a commotion--
I turned to see a stampede...
Car after car, lined up in a row,
Waiting to fill my need.
and the usual suspects.
Behind them were others,
‘All Smiles,’ ‘Best Friend,’
Were honking at
IT WAS TOTAL CHAOS AND CONFUSION!
I heard a still small voice begin its persuasion:
What were you thinking?
There’s no true, lasting joy in this traffic.
All of these vehicles, while eager to please,
Will only serve as ‘joy static.’
So I got out of my car and grabbed my spare.
Took me over an hour to complete.
Then I jingled my keys, waved the traffic on by,
And jumped into the driver’s seat.
When at last all the cars had passed me by,
I was tempted to follow them home.
Then I saw a blood red blinking sign,
“Back to Life’s Freeway, NEXT ROAD.”
My car was the only exiting that day,
But that moment I experienced truest joy,
As I gave the Holy Spirit the wheel.
, there’s a bump and a curve in the road,
The gas tank is running low.
Engine’s due for an oil change,
And the lane is uncomfortably narrow...
But I’ll accept these challenges on life’s highway,
No more detours for me;
His fruit of joy will drive me along,
Providing all that I need for my journey.
“I said to the LORD, ‘You are my Lord;
apart from You I have no good thing.’
The sorrows of those will increase
who run after other gods.
You have made known to me the path of life;
You will fill me with joy in Your presence,
with eternal pleasures at Your right hand.”
Psalm 16:2, 4 & 11, NIV
© Copyright 2009 LauraLee Shaw/lovinthearts.com
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Barbara Thompson Young
12 Oct 2009
Nice, and so true!
06 Jun 2009
Very creative and uniqueâ€¦ interesting poem format, and fun to read. Not the usual word choices make this a great piece. Thanks for sharing your creativity and life experience with us. PTL.
06 Jun 2009
Amen . Great message presented in an upbeat style.
Enjoyed this very much . God bless you always, Julie
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