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How often do we stop
to thank the Lord of all?
We annually pay homage
and wait for the clarion call.
For some an empty ritual
of feasting fills the day;
some people bless the givers
and scarcely stop to pray.
How long will we ignore
the providence of God?
Thanklessly devour His gifts,
with scarce a grateful nod?
A grateful heart fully expresses
thoughts of love in a special way;
for the one who created everything
and blesses all us each and every day.
So let us remember Him
in everything we say and do;
God has granted us life
for everything has become new.
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02 Oct 2007
I really like this. It has the feel of something old and true, a function of the rhyme and meter you used, I think. It's almost perfect, with only a few rough spots in the last two stanzas where you violate the meter you established earlier, but well done. Thank you.
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