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The Initiation Part 2
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Erin felt very self conscious when she stepped out in the two piece swim suit but it looked very good on her slim body. Dexter grinned showing her that he definitely approved of how she looked. Sylvia came out behind Erin in a one piece suit and Michael smiled at Sylvia. They sat by the swimming pool and had sodas at first then dexter asked Erin to come into the pool with him. She got into the pool and splashed around a little, Michael and Sylvia disappeared back into the house for some reason.
Erin and Dexter sat by the pool in towels laughing and talking. Dexter was 21 years old and he worked at Motorola as an engineer. Erin liked dexter but she knew she was too young to be with him and had a constant uneasiness in the pit of her stomach. Erin decided to get up and go find Sylvia but Dexter grabbed her by the arm and told her to let Michael and Sylvia have some privacy.
Dexter asked Erin to walk over to the guest house with him, again she had an uneasy feeling but she let him take her by the hand over to the guest house. Once inside Dexter showed her around the house was very nice as was the mansion. There were three bedrooms in the guest house, Erin absolutely loved the Master bedroom! Once inside the Master bedroom as Erin stood there admiring the room Dexter stood behind her admiring her physical frame. She didn’t hear when he came up behind her all of a sudden, she jumped when he grabbed her around the waist! “It’s all right honey” dexter whispered into her ear.
Erin knew she should have followed her first mind and not come into this guest house with dexter. He was trying to maneuver her to the large bed! Erin struggled “let me go!” she shrieked. “Hey you knew why I brought you here!” dexter growled at her. Erin began to cry but dexter didn’t care about her tears he threw her on the bed. She lay there on the bed crying as he stood up to remove his swimming trunks.
Then something insider Erin’s head clicked she gasped as he removed his swimming trunks! She had never seen a naked man before. As he approached her she lay there whimpering when he kneeled down she made her move! She kicked him hard! He yelled and fell to the floor! Erin jumped up and ran out of the guest house. The large gate was closed erin didn’t know how to get out she was in a panic and terrified that dexter was going to come after her. A Hispanic lady drove up to the gate and the gate opened, Erin ran out of the gate at break neck speed! When Erin looked up she had no idea how far she had run. She was out of breath.
A lady at a bus stop saw her and asked her if she was all right. “My dear are you ok?” the lady asked. “I just want to go home!” Erin said and began crying. “My dear where are your clothes?” the lady asked noticing Erin only had on a skimpy swim suit. “I left them!” Erin said trying to catch her breath.
The lady was very nice she went to a pay phone and called a cab and paid for the cab to take Erin home. When Erin stepped out the cab wearing only a swim suit Martha grabbed her chest in shock. “Erin! Where are your clothes?” Martha asked. Erin ran to Martha and just hugged her and began crying. Martha knew something horrible must have happened she took Erin into the house. Martha put Erin in bed and sat by the bed as Erin lay there shaking and crying. For years Martha had been protecting Erin but somehow in her spirit she knew it had begun!
TO BE CONTINUED!
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