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Hi! Excuse me brother, could you scoot a little right?
Got to lay this gold, transparent carpet,
Arrivals coming from, Heaven's Afar jet!
Hey! Bring the white robe! Shine up that crown bright!
Your here for "Quick tour," new to the light?
Come on and let me show you around!
Nothing like being, heaven bound!
We live in Truth and live is right!
Don't be surprised if you turn around to find,
Two snazzy dressers that love to hang!
They are from, M & G gang!
That's Mercy and Goodness following behind!
If you see something zipping by,
That's Favor, priority send,
It's faster than Fed Ex,
Who gets there, next day, by ten!
You ask, "What's drifting from the throne?"
God's tender attention,
Smooth, rich blend,
It's His own, special, homegrown.
You hear that, Jesus is coming near!
Everyone comes running!
Announcing, "The King is coming!"
Come on! Draw closer and cheer!
Look out! "Hallelujah!" rockets!
Drum-rolling thunder, crackle-flash!
Blitz, sparkle, crash!
Duck! Still haven't been able to clock it!
Praise aerial spins, and spirals,
Rotates, revolves, rap,
Whizbang, you hear a zap!
whirlygig, zing-zang, gyro!
Music opens regal, zone realms,
Music flies, vibes alive!
See musical notes floating by?
Grows wings to fly to throne's helm!
Holy Spirit opens heart to understand,
Number three in Trinity,
Keeps us in unity,
Fruits and gifts bestowed at Wonderstrand!
Well, I got to send you back your earth way,
Did you enjoy your visit today?
On your way out, stop, to say,
"I love you!" to dear Father, and OH! Give Him a wave!
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