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Hidden In The Shadows
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Hidden In the Shadows
Come away, beloved to a place prepared
Away from the noise and earthly cares
Hidden in the shadows, prepared with love
A place that is perfect for my turtle dove.
A place with a fountain overflowing with grace
Prepared for you, away from your race.
A rose petal blanket and a fragrant breeze
Your burden, beloved, I‘d carry with ease.
Your cares and triumphs, I‘d take to my heart.
Beloved, this peace is a work of art.
A comforting peace strengthening your soul
Quieting your fears, is that not your goal?
Have you found this place - personally true?
Peaceful, fragrant and made just for you.
Secure, restful and surrounding the best.
Where is this place, promising this rest?
Beloved, deep in your soul, I wait in this place.
For I am peace, contentment, a fountain of grace.
Come now, to this place that promises this rest
Because, beloved, I give you my best.
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Janice S Ramkissoon
23 Jun 2006
Patricia, this is beautiful. This can help to heal so many hurting souls. Please do continue to write. I saw you message on the forum but hasn't signed up yet so can't respond so I'll encourage you here to keep the faith in your ability as a poet and write for the MASTER. For yor rightly ended your poem with that note of Him giving His best.
Linda Watson Owen
19 Jun 2006
Oh, Patricia, this is a precious, endearing poem. It has the warmth of God's love and the simplicity and directness of His uncomplicated devotion to us, His beloved family. Lovely!
19 Jun 2006
A lovely poem, Patricia!
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