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You are correct that Mr. or Miss Right is not normally going to fall into a person's lap. You are also correct that no matter who one marries, a lot of work and application of things that make for a good marriage will be required. There are a lot of frustrated Christians waiting for the right person to come along. At the same time, 40 percent of even Christian marriages are ending in divorce. This just goes to show, that even among Christians, successful marriages don't just happen.
This is an interesting piece. I'm not sure if everyone will agree with you, but then that's not really the point. As writers we write what God places on our hearts and hope it will touch people or to make them think and decide what they believe.
I noticed a few little things you may want to check out. In the beginning you switch from writing in the first person (I) to second (you)
I also noticed some punctuation errors like no period after Mr. And Mrs. Also the he/she is a bit confusing. If you are writing in the first person, your future spouse would be she. Personally, I think using I instead of you changes the tone of the article, making it feel more like a testimony y. However, the second person can often come off as preachy or sanctimonious.
Overall, you did a nice job with this piece. Your message is clear and gets right to the point. Nice job.