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A raindrop, like a tear on my hand.
The silent weeping of clouds,
the great sounds of streets filled:
such eyes never have i seen.
More beautiful is the thorn than the rose.
With blood petals in bloom and open to the world;
Now "I Am" is said.
What was my name before? i know it not.
A guilty mind is never free when
chains of bondage on the body are cut.
A soul is more struck than the mind,
but set free is the mind who has no work.
Even the wanton are of no want in
that light, and are filled with righteousness.
In the hand and foot and
--about the head...in the side.
i live in a fractal mind,
with algorithms impossible to follow.
I am in... in my mind betwixt myself.
Laid out like a schizophrenic vulture.
So hand me the sword that i may be,
hand on hilt, i am consecrated.
Would i be naught but the carrion comfort?
No, i shall not be by the will of the end.
and so i ask, strength and comfort.
my rope is let out, and hands
--to the sky i throw.
Stack my works and run.
Of all the good and bad in my life
it were all a festering pile of dead flesh
before me on the ground.
I am--for the reaping.
So from my breath comes a snowy grave,
inactive life...to see the world but blind.
Yet by inheritance I have the world,
but I am without love,
--it is useless to me.
Would you be with Me as I ask you?
Come to My hands, son.
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