
'When the ache woke me, I poked the tip of my nose out from under the covers and pulled my knees hard into my chest where my heart hung pounding like a drum.'
Salsa words: ache, poked, hard, hung, pounding,drum
Plainly said, I had to go,tried to hold it,scared to move. No OOmph!
Also how about a lesson on italics so we can feed it back to you to see if we got it!
Thanks again, Ruth Brown[/quote]