
I'll get to my homework later. Just want you to know you are loved and appreciated for the great lessons you provide.
I learn so much from you.
Bless you,
Judy
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I'll give you a similar comment to this as I did on an earlier post:cgpeoples wrote:Homework - strong imagery - poetry
The radiant colors of the rainbow blinded my human eye...but
the glorious promise it beheld made me tremble inside.
The promise of tomorrow, a love so brilliant and true
I bowed my head before Him and whispered...
"Lord, I so love you!"
Beverly, my only concern about this is that you're inconsistent in your use of tenses. That wasn't part of the lesson, but it made your paragraphs a little bit difficult to read. I've color-coded the significant verbs above: the red ones are in past tense, and the blue ones are in present tense. When you switch from one tense to the other, the reader is slightly disoriented. In this case, either tense would have been fine; you just need to choose one and stick to it.Beverly Waller wrote:Hi Jan!
Here's my homework assignment for lesson three. It's the beginning for an article I'm working on.
I tried to begin it with a story, include some images, and use interesting words. I believe it will make a reader interested in reading on. I look forward to your comments.
I knew a man who pursued Christian knowledge. He strives to live for God. Great light floods his mind on many subjects, and he delights to share this treasure. But, he encountered Bible verses that he couldn't penetrate. Peace eluded him. He works for God's smile so that He will be welcomed home later.
After I examined Bible passages that burdened him, the truth in them shone like warm sunshine. I hope you will bask in it and find rest.