Jan's Poetry Class: Haiku

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haiku #2

Post by lidijo1 » Sun Nov 22, 2009 12:06 pm

brown seed planted deep
green leaves reach up for the breeze
red flower dances

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haiku #3

Post by lidijo1 » Sun Nov 22, 2009 12:09 pm

tired nurse needs to sleep
too many haiku in head
pillow calls my name

Lisa J.
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Re: haiku try

Post by glorybee » Sun Nov 22, 2009 1:16 pm

lidijo1 wrote:so many mentions
of soft drink preferences
making me thirsty

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LOL! I love this! Off to have a Diet Coke now.
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another haiku from me to you

Post by lidijo1 » Mon Nov 23, 2009 10:47 am

little black puppy
red Christmas bow around neck
small boy's new best friend

Lisa J.
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what... another one???

Post by lidijo1 » Mon Nov 23, 2009 10:50 am

what now have I done
cannot stop thinking haiku
created monster


seriously, Jan... I'm moving on to the next lesson :)

Lisa J.
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Post by glorybee » Mon Nov 23, 2009 1:03 pm

Lisa, you made me laugh!
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