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In that case, Jan, let me add my sincere thanks to you as well, for you are a true jewel to us writers in helping us to make the proper progress. In scanning the web I haven't found many places where such help is offered. I am amazed at some of you faithful workers of the cross who keep the Site up ...

Thanks Glorybee.
It's a challenge, which is what this is supposed to be. Thank you for taking the time to give us these great lessons. It's much appreciated.
Blessings

Thanks Jan
This is a great lesson and much needed for me. I am utterly too long winded and I am going to have to study this in debt. Thanks so much

Great. An exciting topic again. Thanks so much for these lessons and links. They must take you quite some time, but they are much appreciated.

Thanks Jan Yes, I had read that thread once before too and thankfully it has been the spirit in which I have been able to give and receive feedback. What I meant to say with the red ink is not that my entry gets rewritten. However since English is not my first language it does appear I do make a fai...

Reading an entry carefully before commenting is good advice. I try to read some new entries every week, but I cannot possibly read them all. There is so much to read that it would become a fulltime job. I feel once I read an entry, I have to at least give my assesment, which is usually very positive...

Very good. I truly enjoy reading this. It helps so much to judge your own work and is a great help in positively judge other people's work. Thanks.

Hi Deb Good morning and God bless you Just a quick note about my entry this week, as it seemed to bounce somehow. I resubmitted it again, and this time I received the "thank you for submitting" So I imagine all is well.Just wanted to make sure you didn't get two entries, or no entries at a...

Hi Jan. Just a little clarification. In the sample you wrote: Vases everywhere were filled with lemony lady’s-slippers. Beau knelt beside her chair, grasping her hand in both of his. “Mother,” he said. Then again, “Mother…” I stood at the doorway, silent. Since Beau is starting to speak would it not...

Thanks Jan
Everyone here is so helpful. I am just about amazed. I am going to study this.
Txs.

Hi Jan God bless you. Thank you for your good and constructive critique awhile back. I changed the ending as you suggested and I must say, it looks a lot better now. One thing several people have mentioned to me is that I do not seem to properly place the paragraphs. It's true, I usually just place ...

Thanks for the great Website. It's fast becoming my favorite place on the Web. As far as the challenge is concerned, I believe I am supposed to move up one level, since I got first place in level 1. However I had also just submitted my article on level 1 for the new challenge, since I did not know I...

Hi and God bless I found the critique circle to be a great platform. Much appreciated. I am a beginner as well and greatly valued the critiques that came my way. I have sent a few critiques as well. The only thing I found difficult is to find stories that have not been critiqued yet. If an article a...